omg u should talk to marlene king she would proly do that on show !

that was a good story

This was really good. I really like this pairing, too bad it's so uncommon of a pairing. It was well written, and there were a couple of moments that Ashley's character seemed a bit too willing to sleep with Emily, but for the most part it was pretty good, and you did excellant with Emily's character. I could almost feel the lust as I was reading the story.

Awesome story I loved it :)

i really loved this story. i've seriously read this about 20 times now and its amazing every time. i love your writing. you are very talent. i wish you would write more to this. i love the ashley/emily pairing. they need more fanfics about them. :) and you have amazing writing. i vote you make a chapter 2...and 3...maybe even 4. haha. :) but seriously, i heart the shit outta this!

Brilliant and thanks for writing.

Uhhhhh

Hot

Wow that amazing !

Oh mylanta. Very well written. Great deliciousness, good flow, and real dialogue. Please do more.

I LOVED IT! Definitely one of the best, if not THE best Emily/Ashley fic written. You could just see those characters and that whole fic played out because of the writing - you nailed the characters. And the love scene between them - H.O.T! Okay, think i'm off for a cold shower, lol. Thanks for writing this! :)