|Reviews for Red Cell One|
| JAJ1018 3/15/13 . chapter 15
U should write one about where Beth and Gina come in. Great story! I really enjoyed it
| axtra nonymous xxx 2/10/13 . chapter 15
This story was amazing! I loved how you made the characters so real, and it was intresting that Mick and Prophets first case was not actually out in the field. I would love it if you could do a story about Prophet and Mick's first time in the field, but it's just a suggestion! Back to the point, this story was amazing and i can't wait to read more of your SB fics!
| narwhayley 1/12/13 . chapter 15
Haha this was funny. Mick's driving issue is always a fun topic to read about. And you have gotten awesomefuller with their banter. And then I liked Cooper's little interpretation and thoughts about their little friendship. That was nice. I'm glad that everyone got their badges, even if they are a little fudgey. Thanks for writing! Really REALLY hope you continue to.
| narwhayley 12/23/12 . chapter 14
Great chapter again. I like the start of it, even though Prophet kinda hit Mick. But it showed both of their being-super-hyperactive issues and that's always interesting. It showed how similar they are and everything. And then I'm glad Mick and Prophet still play baseball together. Again, always fun to read. Thanks for writing! Hope you continue xP.
| bindsy 12/14/12 . chapter 14
I've really enjoyed this look into both Mick and Prophet's characters since they were really my favourites of the series. I hope you'll write more Suspect Behavior after this fic! :)
| narwhayley 12/1/12 . chapter 13
Awesome awesome chapter! I'm glad they found Emily and everything. And that she is okay. Creepy neighbor kidnapping lady cases are always interesting. And I think that it is nice Prophet and Mick went out drinking. Between the work and their "I just got out of prison" or "I just moved to America" situations, it makes sense that they only have each other as friends. Very very fun to read. Thanks for writing! Hope you continue xP
| Sara 11/25/12 . chapter 12
Great! Keep it up :)
| narwhayley 11/17/12 . chapter 12
Hi again, thanks for the chapter! I really hope that they are close to finding Emily. The case is still cool how Prophet and Mick can work all the way from their little office base thing. And how the whole story thing is developing. And then I love how you show how they are getting somewhat closer to each other by making fun of each other. Because that's the relationship they probably have and everything. Thanks for writing! Hope you continue xP
| narwhayley 11/6/12 . chapter 11
Haha perfect characterization with Mick and his law textbook. And then I like how you pointed out Prophet is uneasy with his sidearm. I never even thought of how weird it would be coming from jail to a place of authority. Interesting comment there. I hope they catch a break in the case. It seems like everyone is working hard and getting frustrated. It was interesting to see how Mick reacted with an angry Prophet. Just shows the growth of their relationship I guess. Awesome chapter again! Thanks for writing! Seriously thanks, not every writer writes for a show that barely has any readers and was cancelled for over almost two years ago. (meh that was horrible wording but you get my drift) So yeah you're awesome. Hope you continue xP
| narwhayley 11/6/12 . chapter 10
Haha sorry I am a lazy reviewer. I do read though and more than once too. Anyways awesome chapter. I still think the case is awesome and hope thy find the girl. But as much as I like Sam, having Prophect and Mick friending time is fun to read. It is nice that Mick and Prophet areearning more abou each other with the whole apartment thing. Thanks for writing! Hope you continue xP
| narwhayley 10/8/12 . chapter 9
Hello again. Awesome chapter once again. I love all your Mick and Prophet best friendyness. Or growing best friendyness more like it. It is fun reading how you interpret how their relationship growings and everything. Still love the case. As weird as it sounds kidnapping cases never grow old haha. Love the whole falling asleep bit at the end. Thanks for writing! Hope you continue xP
| bindsy 9/29/12 . chapter 9
I'm really enjoying seeing Mick and Prophet together for a whole case, along with getting some backstory from their points of view. Thank you for writing this, these two were my favs!
| narwhayley 9/23/12 . chapter 8
Woah I would of never guessed that it might be that old lady. Your case thing is pretty awesome. Especially the balance between Mick and Prophet bonding time and actual casework stuff. And it sounds realistic and stuff too which is awesome. I wonder where she is hiding the little girl. Anyways thanks for writing! Hope you continue xP
| narwhayley 9/23/12 . chapter 7
Gosh I'm glad you extended the case. It is reAlly interesting and everything. And I like how Mick and Prophet get to work together no offense to Sam, Beth, or Gina haha. Love the comment about Garcia at the end though. Totally awesomeful. Anyways thanks for writing! Hope you continue xP
| GuiltyPleasuresAndDeadlySins 8/19/12 . chapter 6
Please update again soon? Really loving this so far.