This chapter was rather funny and I really enjoyed reading it. Poor Thorin and Tauriel though, being constantly interrupted. I think Bilbo was really oblivious, but I think both Gandalf and Thranduil (oh dear, does that elf annoy me) knew exactly what was going on. I do wonder if 'Thiel put them up to visiting. He just had a little too much fun in this story and I really think he had a hand in it, of course with the writing of the story itself, but also in the story as in he went to those three to suggest visiting. I really hope that makes any sense to you.
Well, at least they got their happy ending, although I'm sensing that this is not yet all of it. Anyway, these laptop stories are great and I love reading them. It was nice to see an update again, so thank you very much for writing this.

Bahaha! This made me laugh. You're really good at building up the tension between characters, even when you're doing it in a slightly tongue-in-cheek way. I also love Thorin's caustic sense of humour.

Nice to be still getting updates from this story! :D

This was just another lovely story again. Oh, and just to check if I've got this right: if they write something on the laptop it also happens in their "real lives" because the stories that are being written on said laptop are their lives? I just hope this makes any sense. It does make sense in my head, but that's not saying very much, I think.
Anyway, I enjoyed this story enormously, featuring Thorin as the great problem-solver. Ha, I think he may have been exaggerating his whole role in the tale, but it was great fun to read and at least this means Rosie has someone as well, which is really nice for her. But whatever purpose will Thorin give his life now. His family is settled, there are no orcs and dragons to fight... Well, I'll just wait patiently for the next chapter.
Thank you very much for writing this!

Thank you for this lovely new chapter. It was nice to see it from 'Thiel's point of view for once. I don't know why, but when you first introduced his character he annoyed me a little (can't really say why though), but now he's definitely one of my favourites.
And oh dear, did he have a difficult time babysitting his own daughter. He was so confused, I don't think he had any idea what he was doing at all. And then he told Thorin that the real thing was even worse. Now you have me wondering how that is possible.
Anyway, thank you very much for writing this and I'm already looking forward to your next chapter.

Ahh... I kind of wanted Lostwithiel to be punished. & I feel like Poppy forgave him way too easily.

Naw, cute. I love JealousThorin. He'll never learn :P

Lovely chapter again. Yes, I know, this is me being the stuck record. Well, lovely job and I liked how you brought in that little incident at the outpost. It's very like Poppy to get a bit mad over it, so yes, that was very nicely done. Thank you so very much for sharing this little story.

That was absolutely hilarious. I'm sitting at uni receiving strange looks from people because I've been cracking up out loud for the last ten minutes. Seriously great.

But I stand by my comments! Arion should feel hard done by; such a beautiful, sculpted young man shouldn't be relegated to 'did not marry,' while his parents get to have all the fun D. I hope he and Mary-Sue have many wonderful adventures together, and Arion gets to appreciate the full spectrum of emotions from a relationship: jealousy, insecurity, angst, passion, worry, guilt... ah, what a bundle of joy he has waiting for him around the corner.

I really enjoyed reading this. So thanks :D

As soon as they brought the laptop out my face went to: o.O I was SO confused!

But I think it's really funny how your continued and I can't even begrudge you Mary Sue.

All in all, I'm glad it's sorta-not-over.

Awww, what a lovely story! I got a chuckle out of Mary Sue, and I liked that the whole family wrote the story with Arion. Thanks so much for this wonderful addition to the tales of Thorin and Tauriel - it couldn't be sweeter.

Does this mean that there is still more to come? I was really surprised to see the email notification, but you won't hear me complain. You really had me laughing with this story. At first I was a bit confused what the laptop was doing in the story, I was very amused by the idea of Thorin and family extending the story themselves. I hope there's going to be a lot more of that.
Thank you for writing and sharing this!

Truly a masterpiece. Thank you.

Beautiful. Just beautiful. I want to thank you so much for sharing this story with us. Actually, it's more like multiple stories rolled in one, both length and bredth and character wise. I've really enjoyed following it through to completion, sometimes laughing, sometimes crying, sometimes rolling my eyes at Thorin's silliness or shaking my head at their adventures. It's been great! My only wish is that there had been more Arion. Personally I loved him as a character, don't know why I just did. Maybe it's cause I imagine him to be really attractive, and a bit of a bad-ass too. Haha, I dunno. That and I didn't like Lostwithiel that much. He annoyed me as a character, but I'm not sure whether that's what you were going for half the time or not!
Anyway I've loved watching this epic unfold, and I thank you so much for taking the time and effort to give it to us. Please don't stop writing!
Appello

Well, I have to admit, there was a few instances in which I thought you were dragging the story out unnecessarily longly... But then I'd read the chapter & still find plenty of enjoyment in it. I really liked Lostwithiels's POV in this last chapter... & I love your style of writing

I loved it! 'Thiel became one of my favorite characters. And I started shipping Tauriel/Thorin which is really gonna mess with my head when Tauriel shows up in the movies. I'm gonna wonder why her and Thorin don't get together!