this is really good!

This story is absolutely excellent. I love how very in character you kept everyone.

Gosh, Marguerite is quite the spoiled brat even as a young child. Poor Jacqueline, she just wants so much to be loved and she doesn't get any positive attention from her Mom... I just want to hug her!

I hope you continue to write for the Ever After section; there aren't NEARLY enough fics here!

very cool story. I liked it! well done! )