WHoa! The part about the White Rider really surprised me! I jumped about a mile when he shouted...
Nice job!
Poor Bran. :(

truly awesome!

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That was gorgeous...I mean I haven't read the books in a year or so... but now you've got me going...I'm pulling my book out and starting again,,
Thankyou so much!

Fluffy and dramatic. Like the ending.

cool!

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Wow. that was really good. a lot of fics are slash, and i just can't see that. you made this very believable. loved it
continue writing! :D

(BrIt)

*Ish bawling her eyes out* I LOVE IT :( It's so coool... :(

Wow!!!! Great ending, I was thinking 'what is going on here?' Jane can't die....
But wait, if they can be together in the end then I guess she can. As always great writing. I enjoyed this tremendously and hopefully look forward to your next project.

wow!!! great story and great ending!!! & fantastically written :-)
perfect (almost) love story!!!! and happy ending!!!
I love this story!!!!!!

Great ending! I loved how Bran got a chance, but it was a Will/Jane fic! Nice job!

Awwwww! (Cheesy, I know, but it leaves you with that warm fuzzy feeling...) What a nice...ending? Or is it a beginning? (Hint: This reviewer wants more chapters! :) Nice way for Simon and Will to say goodbye. Not cheesy, but true to themselves. I thought the last line in chapter 9 was a perfect line for Jane to say. I only wish you might have filled in a few more details of Will's later life. Keep writing! Cheers!
-Alana
http://www.angelfire.com/ar2/tygrrr

Ooooohhhhhh! That was so sweet! Awesome!

oooooohhhhh that is so sweet, you are going to write a sequel right? Well i think you should if you weren't I like the story line, though I don't really like Merlion all stern and strict in the earlier chapters, but then I see him more of a father figure. The ending is good, it's unusual and happy!!!!Always good!

you killed her?! I can't believe you killed her! i like happy endings! & perfect love stories! noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!

so keep writing, godammit!

How could you?! (But someone had to do it)
Great chapter - I hope it's not the end. I'm glad Bran & Will have partly made up, though their fight scene in the previous chapter was good!