That...was hilarious! (maybe you should take creative writing at university?)

i loved this part "I ..need...that"

This is marvellous, really! And hilarious too. Gregory the Dragon, master of the Ominous Latin Chanting? Lmao. And I love the Arisen's pathetic little "I need that..." as she watchs it removing her heart.

Also, the line "I don't know, we're not important to the plot". Lol, that harpy is the smartest person in the game, she ought to have been leading us against the dragon instead! :D

And that song really is unfitting. I didn't realise at first because the intro music is just a short of drumbeat/handclap thing, but then when the proper song breaks out a few minutes later, it's a bit weird and doesn't work even though it's good. O.o

There were a few lines in this that made me die out laughing. Quite a humorous piece you have here. Good work. :D

This reminds me of Skyrim... This game sounds interesting. BACK TO THE STORY! I really liked it, it was very funny. As always.

This is a pretty funny parody! You had me laughing throughout this entire fanfic. Excellent writing, and very creative.

Doesn't... really... get it. ut ROTFL hahahah!