Just wonderful. A very satisfying short story, with great plot, characterization, and theme. I enjoyed seeing the dead come back to life. Oh, and Snyder? Priceless! Thanks for a great read!

Totally awesome! This is the most original fic I have EVER EVER EVER read! There was so much spell casting wackiness! Plus, seeing so many old characters come back in one story is a real treat. I would never have thought of such a crazy and funny story.

There were a few little continuity things I noticed, though: first, Glory obviously can't recognize the Key at close range since she talked to Dawn twice before ever finding out; second, how does Buffy know Dalton's name?; and, third, how come Buffy could sense what was going on during the time freeze while Kendra couldn't.

Also, the dialouge sometimes lost the character's voice in order for the exposition to be made clear (especially in the case of the Master, though that was made up for by the image of him riding on top of the Mayor).

The story was action packed, zany, and awesome throughout, and ended nicely with Jenny's goodbye to Giles.

Favorite part: "Dreg, if I turn around, and you actually have a sock in your mouth . . ."

Hope to read more of your stuff soon!

P.S. I would suggest posting anything else you write gradually with the chapter system, since the length scares some people off.

What a wonderful story! A great plot well carried out. I liked the way your narration changed subtly from character to character (eg. the Master, or Trick), and I liked the ending. Great. Thanks!