|
| Reviews for My Sister in Law |
|---|
   1BleachFan 8/4/12 . chapter 1You're story has a good plot, a very good plot actually, but the grammar is so off. No offense but your grammar is so elementay, which makes this story hard to read ._. It's so confusing at times. Also, their names are way too similar to each other, another confusing thing about this story. Your plot is nice, and it's a great idea, just work on your grammar. I advise getting a beta? Or at least someone to revise your work. - Head Captain |
| Makorra123 7/25/12 . chapter 7 Great chapter! Can't wait till the next! |
| Guest 7/17/12 . chapter 6 This story is pretty confusing. The names sound the same, you're supposed to indent every time someone speaks, because you can't tell who's talking. Not bad, though. |
| Fuschiaphoenix 7/17/12 . chapter 1 The first paragraph-just made me jump for joy ;) |
| Guest 7/17/12 . chapter 5 this kind of reminds me of how my family acts |
| Guest 7/16/12 . chapter 5 make krotana beat som ass |
| makorrarocks 7/18/12 . chapter 6 love it a million stars:) |
| BolinxKorra24 7/17/12 . chapter 6 I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the great work! ;) |
| Makorra123 7/17/12 . chapter 6 Great chapter! Update very soon! |
| Makorra123 7/14/12 . chapter 5 Great chapter!Update really soon! |
| patty cake rocks 7/14/12 . chapter 5 uh oh.. |
| Makorra123 7/13/12 . chapter 4 Great chapter!Update the next soon! |
| Makorra123 7/12/12 . chapter 3 Great chapter!Update soon! |
| Tessika14 7/11/12 . chapter 2 Krotana OMU she tried to be badass..I WANNA MEET THIS KID BRO.. |
| Makorra123 7/11/12 . chapter 2 Great chapter!Update soon! |
