TxL :3 any who can't waif for the next chapture

this story is getting good! quite suspenseful. awesome and can't wait until the next chapter!

-Reish

i must be pretty hot shadow

she's hot

Noooooo! Not sour patch kids! Haha Mexican hat dance! Ooooooh,Tom and Lizzy did it! And Kylie was close on catching them! Is Al jealous of Jake, or is it the truth? Only time will tell!

Oooooh. Tom and Lizzy making love to each other, huh? Nice! ;) Can't wait to see Kylie's reaction to what Tom and Lizzy did. This story is getting better and better! Keep it up!

Haha! The boys are jealous! :D

And I can see some Eltom (Elizabeth and Tom) romance and some Kyill (Kylie and Will) romance. :D Sorry about my horrible couple mashes. But I couldn't seem to think of a couple mash up name for Kylie and Will. But I kind of like Eltom. Anyway, update soon!

I love how you made Liz seem so vulnerable when it comes to Tom. They really look like they like each other. I hope some romance will blossom between them. Like maybe they get an unexpected moment alone together. I'd really like that :)

And oh no! Someone save Kylie! Quick!

Wow. I had no idea Kylie was Tom's sister. This is an interesting story.

Squeeeeeee! I wuv the kissing! X3 Keep it up! KRS, Out!

It's a good story line

this story is awesome so far! can't wait until the next!

-Reish

WOOHOO! Family reunion!

Still loving the story. Hope to see more of it soon. Keep up the good work with the OC's

And now little Theo appears! So cuuuute! ANYHACK! I hope you return to your usual happy mood soon! KRS, Out!