It's been many years since you've updated, but just found this fic and enjoyed what you did write. Hoping that just maybe you'll update? Don't know, but it's a great story!

A truly excellent story that should not be abandoned but apparently has been. A whole day of reading...and no resolution in sight is quite sad.

Still, a great job.

This is amazing. Really good! Please please please continue!

Wow! This is an excellent story, one of the best I've ever read. It's very suspenseful and interesting and the writing and characterization is very good. I'm dying to know what happens next. I see it hasn't been updated for awhile, but I can still hold out hope...

I thought you had written at the end of Ch 14 that Obi-Wan had died? How can he be alive now? That really doesnt make any sense...

Poor Obi-Wan! I had hoped he might hang on a bit longer than this... And I suspect that Ani wont be very interested in the Council's words, of choosing another Master for him. But then, the Council doesnt understand Ani very well do they? They never had a mother or a family...

Poor Obi-Wan. And Anakin must be filled with awful dread having to sit there and wait, not knowing if his master will die or not. Great writing in this chapter.

I bet the Jedi Council was surprised to see Padme with the message. I hope the ship arrives on Coruscant soon. GOOD chapter!

Poor Obi-Wan! I hope he'll be OK but since it was some nasty, unknown poison...

going to the next chapter...

I wonder what nasty stuff he put into the water? And how does he know that Obi will drink from that glass and not Anakin?

Uh oh! How will Anakin explain sneaking in so late to Obi-Wan? That I'd like to see!

A meddling green troll ... that's funny! I guess Palpy has never seen a real troll as they tend to be very big. :) GREAT chapter!

So a Master and apprentice were killed. I wonder if the Council was blind to that as well?

This was a really good chapter! I liked the suspense and the mystery. Who died and how? Was the assassin working on some sort of germ (virus)? It sounded like maybe he was, unless I read the hints wrong. And the Council being blind can't be good...

Hm... so Obi-Wan is worried about going to the reception? Could it be some villian will try to kill him there? With his bad leg he won't be able to move very well and he may be an easy target?