Reviews for Sevadonn's First Target
President Zaphod Beeblebrox 10/9/12 . chapter 1
this was really interesting and well written. Good show! Look forward to more :D:D:D
Cassey11 7/11/12 . chapter 1
Thanks for re-uploading this :D

Once again I really enjoyed this. This is exactly like what I imagined Sevadonn would be like and I really like that you include the part with the child to really emphasize his cold character and how similar and yet extremely different Sevadonn and Six are. I like in your story that he is very logical, intelligent and resourceful, like Six, but when it comes to actual killing he remains calm, passive and ruthless whereas Six would breakdown, get himself shot or go on a massive guilt trip after.

I didn't really like Sevadonn that much in the book (probably because he had a small part) but I'm starting to really like the character after reading your two stories because of how we see the similarities and (major) differences between him and Six which I think are really important and interesting.

Great work and sorry for not reviewing sooner!