I like dark stories and imagining Violet going through this horrific experience is really awesome and interesting. I love the writing.
Hope you be able to continue soon.

Wow. That was awesome! I can't wait for the next update. I started reading this today, and couldn't stop. I couldn't stop crying either!

This is really good! So much detail! Please wrote the next one

wow you really do have a way with words, Some people don't write first person POV's well but you nailed it, it was perfect! you can feel the emotion through the words and it's fantastic. I love it. I cant wait to read the next chapter, Update soon! (also will jack jack ever play a roll in this story?)

Wow great chapter i have a feeling i know where your going with this

omg i love it so far i give it a solid 11!

Damn, I've been dreading this chapter; I wish that were real, what Violet just did.

why should she belive them

ok i really thought she was free for a moment guess you fooled men like this story a lot hope you continue it

this is so great keep it up.

I think Dash can't be really death, maybe another simulation.
And I think Violet isn't really hurting herself and she haven't been in this hell chamber for two years. Now Violet finds difficult (or impossible) to separate the truth from simulation or from just nightmares.
Sorry for my english, I'm Italian.

Hi,
it's really a nice story. Sad, but nice.
I'm waiting for next chapter :-)

Hi, nice story, keep it up:)

Beautiful. :)
It satisfies my eagerness when Violet finally fights back. And using Dash's death as her motivational tool was, in my opinion, the best way to pushing her pain so far that she just deosn't care about the hurt anymore. All she wants now is revenge, and I love it! :D

It's not often I find authors that dare to step out of the comfort zone, and write to the darkness's full potential. So i'm proud to say I found you! please keep writing! :)

I thought I wrote dark stories; this just takes the cake.