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T 8/10/12 . chapter 1 Please understand this is not meant snarky: The University of Alasa Fairbanks has one of the top engineering schools in the US. It has a Land, Sea and Space grant research capabilities, there are 3 AF bases with huge radar etc facilities, and the Geophysical and Arctic Research depts are also pretty well known... so, they could wind up there and Zane would be a-ok. :-) |
purplepotatopig 7/15/12 . chapter 1LOL - "Oh, that kind of domestic" yeah. this could work. no sugar-coated promises, just a heartfelt commitment to make a go at it. this could also be the start of other little stories, yes? life in boston? fbi assignments? kids in the kitchen? hint! hint! |
QuasiOuster 7/12/12 . chapter 1You're so good at writing the two of them facing real-world, ordinary drama from a Eureka-style angle. It's very relatable. There was a lovely point-counterpoint flow that fit your scenario well. I like how they were ultimately willing to compromise and come out of their comfort zones a little bit for the sake of just the potential of spending their lives together. That's some well-earned growth and maturity for them and leaves me with awesome warm fuzzies. |