PLEASE WRITE A CHAPTER SOON?

IM ACTUALLY LOVING THIS STORY...ITS BUILDING UP A LOT OF TENSION X

THIS...IS...AMAZING
PLEASE UPDATE

Poor Phoebe! Collapsing and ending up in hospital with not much memory would be horrible. I'm trying to figure out whether 'Fiona' was a dream, or actually real. And if it was real, how did they find Phoebe collapsed. This chapter was NOT crap like you think it is! Can't way for the next chapter, and to see what the dream has in store for Phoebe next :)

I love your Fan fiction. Please, Keep writting cuz I Love it I just Love it! Don't leave me like that D:

I'm very interested. Cam and Luce's daughter? I think YES! :D Update soon please!

OMG PHOEBE'S AN ANGEL! I'm a bit confused as to how it is possible that she is, but I trust you'll explain this in the upcoming chapters! Poor Phoebe- she has no idea what these people wanted from her, and why they hurt her. I'm really excited for the next chapter, and interested to see if she will tell anybody about her wings.

This chapter is so full of action - it's so cool! I agree with your note that it's a little confusing, but I know that the next chapter will clear up what's happening. I'm so so so curious and excited to find out what's gonna happen next! Also, some constructive critiscm, I think you should half the first paragraph, only because my eyes got a little lost with all the words! Hope you enjoy the holidays! :)

I am liking your story, i realy like how u have kept the main characters of the fallen books in this, especialy cam, i hope him and pheobe get together, but just wanted to say cant wait to see where this story goes

This chapter was really good, and it didn't really feel rushed - there were a few spelling errors, but there always are in every fanfiction :) I'm sooo excited for next chapter - you better continue for where this one left off, with Phoebe and Murphy going inside together! You HAVE to make the most of this opportunity! I'm not too sure for a story title sorry, maybe Out Of the Shadows? Anyway, great chapter, and good luck with coming up with a name :)

It's Cam! I'm so excited that you've introduced him to this story and I hope we'll soon see an appearance of the other angels and Miles and Shelby. I enjoyed this chapter - the tension between Phoebe and Cam is soo good! Don't you dare pass up on the opportunity for a relationship between those two! I'm sure that soon Phoebe is going to discover about angels and nephilim, and I'm interested to see if it will affect Fiona and Phoebe's friendship. On a quick last note, the description of the winter in this chapter was beautiful! Good work :)

up adte soooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnn nnn please!

IS FIONA MIELSAND SHELBYS dAUGHTER OR NO?

OMG PHOEBE OVERHEARD ASDFGHJKLASDFGHJKLASDKL This is getting really really exciting- I can't wait until she finds out! I'm trying to figure out who the female could be in the office with Steven and Francesca.. anyway, great work on this chapter! :)

I loved this chapter so much! I'm extremely intrigued by the boy with the dark hair and green eyes ;) and have a few hints as to who he might be! I like where the story is going with Phoebe being invited to join the gifted for a lesson- Francesca and Steven have obviously discovered who she is. I just realised I didn't review the last chapter, and I'm sooo sorry! Thanks for the mention of my birthday this chapter :)

Anyway, I'm counting the minutes until the next chapter! I see a potential love triangle surfacing- I'm enjoying the tension between Phoebe and Murphy a little too much, and can't wait to see some more of the mysterious hottie ;) GREAT WORK!