| Reviews for The One That Left |
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Freefan1412 5/31/13 . chapter 1I don't know why you think it was terrible. In fact I loved it. It was amazing. The little snippets hardly connected or not at all and some from AUs, but they were still amazing and I love (and hate) how I can build a background to each and everyone (the possibilities won't leave my head and drive me insane for hours). I hope you write something like this again. :) |
SapphireShelle91 12/5/12 . chapter 1I loved this. It was like looking through a Morgana kaleidoscope. It was great! Don't suppose you could do this for Merlin, Arthur and Gwen could you? |
Guest 8/30/12 . chapter 1 You had her kiss Merlin... I will bloody love you forever :) |
Kreuz106 8/9/12 . chapter 1Hahaha this is awesome! I love it |
trueromantic333 7/22/12 . chapter 1This was good! Excellent, even! Writer's block sucks though, I hope you recover soon! |
ArodieltheElfofRohan 7/13/12 . chapter 1Oh my goodness, these were all so good! I think my favorite one was the one where Gwen is comforting Morgana after she has a nightmare. It's so sweet, but sad when you think about it because of how Morgana is now. :/ Again, these were great! |
GeoffreyF 7/13/12 . chapter 1That wasn't terrible at all! It was unusual, sure, but it was a really lovely character portrait - a life in snapshots, as it were. Each snippet adds one more piece to the puzzle of Morgana; we've discussed my problems with her character before, but I always love it when someone attempts to unravel her and show what makes her tick, and you've done a marvellous job. There's almost a feeling that the ficlets are even sometimes from separate and alternative realities, "might-have-beens" in a sense, just to draw out her character a little more. The whole thing is absolutely lovely, and I wish we could all combat writer's block with such aplomb! |
princessozmaofoz 7/13/12 . chapter 1No, they weren't terrible. I really enjoyed them. It was interesting to see how completely Morgana has changed over time. Great work :) |
Merlinfanatic77 7/12/12 . chapter 1AWW! This amazing and beautiful! But,... so sad. MF |
BloodFromTheThorn 7/12/12 . chapter 1I really liked it :3 It was cute in a kind of eerie way :) -Thorn |
noamg 7/12/12 . chapter 1No, it wasn't terrible - in fact, it's one of your best fic. You remembered that Morgana is supposed to be a multi-layered character, something that the show's writers seemed to have forgotten in the last two seasons. |
April29Roses 7/12/12 . chapter 1I can't imagine that you may have thought his terrible! The drabbles were short, but it was like seeing Morgana in glittering bits, as if reflected in the crystal cave itself. The present, the past, what could have been, what may come to pass... Morgana has always been a mercurial character! This piece very much suited her. I hope your writers block resolves quickly. I'm sure you are hearing lots of unsolicited advice, and of course I can't presume that I understand. But when nothing is coming creatively in one medium, sometimes switching to another, can break the block, (writing to painting, to collage, to music, to video, to etc...). |
alicat259 7/12/12 . chapter 1I liked it! Not your best work, but enjoyable nonetheless :) If you want some inspiration, I think this might cheer you up - this article was on the front page of the Brisbane newspaper yesterday and I immediately thought of you, so hopefully you get a laugh out of it! . /ipad/global-leaders-to-converge-on-brisbane-for-2 014-g20-summit/story-fn6ck45n-1226423064291 |
whitecrossgirl 7/12/12 . chapter 1What are you on about 'terrible'. You're either fishing for compliments or don't realise how epic you are. The contrasts between Good Morgana and Evil Morgana were brilliantly done. At times I really miss when Morgana was good and nice but at the same time Evil Morgana is quite badass, she holds nothing back. If she wants to kill you then she won't stop until your corpse is lying on the ground in front of her. I have to admit, one thing I'd love to see is Morgana turning back to the good side (albeit briefly) to help combat a shared foe |
irezel 7/11/12 . chapter 1MY EMOTIONS. . ! |