|Reviews for Lily's Child|
| Peaceandunity 5/15/13 . chapter 7
| FF 5/4/13 . chapter 7
| Team Major Whitlock 2/15/13 . chapter 7
I love this story especially this chapter, I hope that you can update soon since this story is amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter. Just to let you know that if you need any help with this story either with ideas or just help then feel free to PM me no matter how big or small, I hope you update soon. Summer x
| HPGurl 2/1/13 . chapter 7
Oh gosh I really like the concept of everyone closer! But please cut out the Drarry it's kinda ehhhhh
Keep the story near to the exact ;)3
| Helene 1/27/13 . chapter 7
Ok that was a fun twist on the original. Hope I come across this story later to find out what happens next.
| Helene 1/27/13 . chapter 6
Re: Ok, even though there are many reviews and reviewers, I won't be updating unless I get 10 reviews per chapter.
Your introduction was poorly done in my opinion as it incites a confrontational attitude which is likely to provoke a 'To hell with this, I will go read something else!' response. Also if you take a long time to update an individua reader has little controle over the results. They can review but they can't make others review.
Re: It's just rather unfulfilling to write 2,600 - 3,400 words, and only get one review.
It helps to tell us we are letting you down. Now your readers know we are dropping the ball in motivating our writer those of us who care about reading more of the story will make an effort to write something. If you need more feedback asking for our opinion is a better way to get results. Offering to write a prank scene for every ten reviews would offer even better incentive.
That said; your writing & descriptive word choice is well done, your plot is advancing suitably quickly for a short story, and your plot has been suficiently intriguing to keep me reading despite a backlog of stories on my reading list. Huzzah
| Guest 1/27/13 . chapter 7
| Saissister 1/20/13 . chapter 7
Awesome dumbles always forgets the slytherins no matter what :(
| LM Ryder 1/10/13 . chapter 7
this is a wonderful story. I love the way you made Ron a snake and Draco a Lion. ironically enough, I am watching Deathly Hallows Part 2 while i am typing this review.
| LM Ryder 1/10/13 . chapter 3
LOL still chortling over the dungeon bat thing!
| LM Ryder 1/10/13 . chapter 1
really good chapter a great start and you have kept my interest right to the end of the chapter (which is kind of difficult because I am dyspraxic
| Jessie Cullen-Potter 101 x 1/3/13 . chapter 7
please continue with this!
| Jessie Cullen-Potter 101 x 1/3/13 . chapter 1
i like this story so far, I love the little twist on the dursley's being nice and loving towards Harry. I'm really excited for the rest of the story :)
| scv25 12/25/12 . chapter 7
Y U NO UPDATE.
| Mr.kitty 11/13/12 . chapter 7
I really loved where u put Ron and I hope you take Dumbledore and ginny down a few well bye bye