I really enjoyed reading these first two chapters. You have a really good premise here I hope you decide to continue this...Best of luck ;)

Man ... It's so frustrating. Only two chapters.
Maybe you will remember the story and update once a year.
Sorry, I'm a little bitter. It's a backhanded compliment. The story and plot seem great.

I need more of this! I am really impressed with the detail of the Chicago area you put in there, and that you made Edward a working-class Irish boy. I already enjoy this so much.

I hope this continues soon, I'm very curious about Marie's background and how their relationship evolves. I'm assuming she starts to care for Ed?

Can't wait to read more :)

I'm so intrigued already, wanting and needing to know more. Keep it up!

Exquisite writing, lovely integration of characters - can't wait to see where this will go!

- Neica.

Interested to see where this will go. It looks promising so far.