Wonderful. Believable. Inspirational.

I'm loving it. The best part was when he went to punch then intruder and realized his arm is gone. Seriously amazing, well done. Thanks for this!

I'm really enjoying this story so far. Can't wait to see where you take it. Great work.

I love it. I can't wait until the next instalment.

so...ready to write?!
i just found out i actually prefer amon. turns out, he's hotter!
i still want to read this story, though, 'cuz you're the author and all.

I've just fallen in love with this pairing. I cannot wait for a new chapter.

Okay, I'll admit it- I haven't actually watched The Legend of Korra yet. Goodness help me if I can resist anything you write, though.

I am very excited for this story. Loving the interactions between Korra and Tarrlok. Keep up the good work.

What a captivating story you've created! I just love your portrayal of the characters, they're so far very true to form, and have a certain depth they lack in the show itself. I love it when authors can expand on a character, giving them new depth - it shows real talent. I feel like I'm repeating what others have said, but your writing style is superb, emotive, flowing and, simply, perfect. Very easy to read, yet so vivid. That's not easy to do, and I commend you for it.

The atmosphere is wonderful as well. A perfect balance of tension, which I always like. The fact that you pull it off so well is impressive.

What else can I say? This is a wonderful start to a story, and I eagerly await the next chapter.

I saw this here then at tumblr then here again and-DEAR GOD ALL THESE FEELS. ;( SAD TARRLOK NOOO This is great. I love your writing and the flow of this fic and the humanity in this. I LOVE IT. I'M PINING OVER WHAT WOULD HAPPEN NEXT

I am so pleasantly surprised to see you writing for this fandom. I was randomly searching for fics on this awesome ship when I saw your name attached to one. The look of shock on my face had to have been comical. You're one of the first if not THE first fanfic author I read and your stories are right up there with the elite. It's good to see an author who knows what she's doing take this pairing in hand :)

This is absolutely my favorite post-finale-Tarrlok-survives fic. ;-; You paint such a vivid and honest portrait of the characters, and I really feel for Tarrlok. (Hell, you also managed to write some makorra scenes that did not make me want to scratch out my eyes, so that should tell you how awesome you are). I'm not sure if this was the fic you were talking about deleting/giving up on on your tumblr, but please, don't abandon it! Tarrlok and Korra are so interesting, and I want to see where you go with this ;_; My little heart is aching

Love the idea of Tarrlok surviving the boat explosion..Hope you keep updating!

I love your writing! It's so natural, connected and flowing, not forced or awkward at all.

I really liked Tarrlok, I was really upset that he died in the show. There aren't enough fics out there where he survives or is portrayed well, or even accurately. Mostly it's just EVIL!Tarrlok and B $* d!Tarrlok.

I like how you've captured Korra's personality too, she seems cannon to me so far.

Wow. I have to say, I really like your writing style. It's simplistic and detailed at the same time. The progression of the story is nice too. I like the pace.

Very glad you're posting here again :) Once again, it's about a story and a pairing that I know absolutely nothing about (but you sure did start a huge Inuyasha obsession for me- specifically Kags and Sesshoumaru, but whatever). I'm going to have to check out Legend of Korra now.

Your writing is enjoyable no matter what genre or world- just love it, totally engrossing.

Can't wait for more!

Welcome back :)