Interesting scene though fyi in the game chakwas says she never had a family ala never got married or what not, still nicely done

Oh man, I feel a little depressed now. Very well written though. Good job. :)

My heart ugh... So bitter sweet. Very touching, brilliant, thank you for sharing.

Ah man, I can't stop crying. Wonderfully written story.

Everything is just so perfect! Jack, Shepard, hell, Zaeed! I think for half a second my brain accepted it as cannon and now it's four in the morning and I am SAD! Well done.