Oh my fucking gods, old and new, I made it to the (current) end. This is simultaneously the most boring and the most intriguing fanfic I've read in a while. It's like wading through tons of monotonous rambling ("Oh, Sansa, how I love you!" - "Oh, Sandor, I love you too!") with exponentially widening grins and deepening love (seriously, how many times have you written that she looked at him with the widest grin he had ever seen on her or that she loved him "more than ever"?) just to get to some morsels of good writing. The main problem being monotony. Apart from a few places where you sped up or slowed down the narrative to contrast the passing of time, e.g. the action-packed trial in Norvos and the calm and peaceful days in Hrolf's castle, the rest of it just goes on and on and on. Twice, because almost everything is described from both Sansa's and Sandor's perspective.

Judging from the reviews, you have your audience, so good luck and keep up the steady productivity...

Amazing story! Great chapter! I hope that sandor will return in time for the birth of their child! I think that sansa will not like the birthing part because without peridural it would hurt like hell and it would be funny if she was crushing sandor's hand! Anyway, please UPDATE SOON! Bye!

Oh wow! I think I'm right about the reason why Sansa want Shaggy to accompany Sandor. Hehe..I love those naming baby moments I'm surprised they want to name their son Ned, I'm on the edge of my seat and about to shout : "No not again!",lol. Anyway, I'm gonna miss you and this story but take care and go enjoy yourself. :)

Bloodsired

Love all the baby hub-bub, but I am absolutely dreading this separation. As in tubs of ice cream and curling up in a fuzzy blanket dreading it! But I have faith in your story and writing that it will be a sweet agony. As much as it pains me to see them apart, I am as fixated in this story as ever! Keep up the amazing writing!

Good and nice interaction.

awesome chapter and YES! PLEASE! a little ned! although i'm not losing my hopes of twins. i hope sandor gets backin time bor the birth and wins the respect of the northermen without geting too hurt. can't wait to see what's next...
not no pile on but... edar is the one staying with sansa and osha will go with sandor to show the men the secrets trails and paths, right? just asking...
i don't know how i'm going to go TWO weeks whitout may sunday's fix of fic...
come back soon! ;)
P.D. have a nice vacation, you deserve it!

OMG! I love it!
I truly wish sandor doesn't have to go to war!
Please? Please...pretty please...

Your sansan...worth the wait!

I've got reread this did Osha ever get a new spear and armor to indicate her position?

I'm in love of this fic. I'm waiting for the new one.

Great! Team Sandor & Shaggydog to Winterfell! I think part of why Sansa agree to take Shaggy with Sandor is to see if he was in danger during the siege now that she knows about warging.

I love Sandor's reaction to the baby, just adorable. It sucks that they have to separate, but I sense some Sandor-Shaggydog Brotp action! hehe

Separate Sandor from Sansa and baby?! My heart won't be able to handle that! I knew things were getting to good to be true. I feel that with the upcoming chapters of them being apart, I'm going to be a nervous wreck. Please keep my otp safe and alive!

On a different note, your writing never ceases to captivate me. You keep the story flowing, which is hard to do with stories as long as this. You keep us interested in what's coming. Excellence! Just absolute excellence!

Ellos han pasado por todos los estados mentales que yo hubiera pasado en su lugar! Ya me imaginaba que sandor no querría que sansa se expusiera al peligro de retomar winterfell. Pero que cambió sera para ellos separarse después de haber pasado tanto tiempo juntos, después de tantos meses compartiendo todo todo el tiempo. El mayor tiempo que habían estado separados antes fue durante el encarcelamiento en norvos, estos meses ahora serán de pura ansiedad para todos nosotros (si, me incluyo en la ansiedad por que se reunan). Me sorprendiste con lo de shaggy, porque no creo que el lazo que une los chicos Starks con sus lobos permitiera que se separen voluntariamente. Para serte honesta, estaba esperando que en el bosque encontrarán a Nymeria y así sansa tendría una loba con ella y arya podría ver en sus sueños que por lo menos dos de sus hermanos están bien. Tal vez en el futuro...?
A riesgo de repetirme semanalmente, increíbles descripciones de los pensamientos y sentimientos de los personajes, hermosamente escrito todo. Contando lo que falta para el próximo capítulo...

It will be hard for them to be apart, but it's for the best.

I love I love I love I love!
Nice present for me when I arrived home.
Thanks girl