I want more from this. I'll definitely buy your novel! Expertly written and a joy to read (yet heartbreaking at the end), but only watch your commas and such a bit, eg. "Hello husband," and "No, no you promised nothing would happen to me!"
Apart from that I see nothing wrong. Looking forward to your novel, and best of luck!

I know I technically already reviewed this, but I just could not restrain myself. How on earth is this reviewless. This is amazing, well written, heartbreakingly sad, and fantastically in- character for /everyone/. 0.0 You are my idol. I cannot wait for the actual novel. :)