I'll take the story. First of all, I need to know your ideas for the story, as well as Lady Phantom R's story concept so I can do it. Thanks!

Awesome story! Can't wait to see how it turns out...what was with the Fondue thing anyway? Ah well...keep up the good work

PS: Um I dont know if you do this or not but...can you give a Happy Birthday shoutout for me? I understand if you dont, just thought I should ask!

Awsome story. Can you write more chapters?

Phantom R is so hot...yet so mean...

hi, I like the story

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I have nothing else to say, really

Awesome, I really like this story it's going great! You should definately continue.

Ah! Here we go! Dutchess Elizabeth and the Inspector are getting into the fray!

(I would write more, but I have to leave right now!)

Oh, and thanks for the review on my Rhythm Thief story!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Galexia

I am really enjoying this piece.

Good job mt friend and keep up the good work!

NICE I LOVE IT

great job, like it alot im tellin a friend about you (someone on deviant *a rhythm thief roleplayer and its raph i mean, "Phantom R"

Nice work really! I like this type of story :) I like storie with sexual themes too ;)

Please, continue the story! It's so...INCREDIBLE. I haven't words to describe it :)

Poor Phantom R,

Praise: Very nice chapter so far! I like the look into Raphael's actual feelings
Critisism: When Marie first saw Raphael, I expected her to be more surprised. After all, as far as she knew, he was dead!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Galexia

Great job my friend! Keep up the good work and remember, I am here rooting for you:-)

The conversation seems really sad...