|Reviews for Cardinal King|
| Blade 1/22/13 . chapter 10
Thank you! Another great chapter. I can't wait to see what changes you'll make. Why? Because it's called FAN fiction, meaning that it's a fan's take on a story we all love. And nothing make my day more than seeing different ways the story can go. I really enjoyed the companionship between the kings and how they act more like brothers than collegeaues. As for Jeweled Tiara I can't wait to see what will happen when she sees Venus. And what about late on in the plot? An evil Usagi is an interesting concept, one that I hope you consider. It seems that the other kings have an idea that Mamoru is the real Prince. Can't wait till the next chapter. Please update soon.
| Guest 1/22/13 . chapter 10
Update soon can't wait for good parts and action
| LoveInTheBattleField 1/22/13 . chapter 10
Keep it coming.
| Taeniaea 1/22/13 . chapter 10
| tiffany aka basketcase 1/22/13 . chapter 10
Oooo it's getting juicy!
| James Birdsong 1/22/13 . chapter 10
Excellent ten chapters
| AM9 1/22/13 . chapter 10
Great chapter! I love stories where Usagi gets along well with the shitennou. And her and Mamoru's flirtation is too adorable. Looking forward to seeing what the major change is.
| Blade 1/19/13 . chapter 9
Another great chapter! when can we expect the next installment?
| BelieveHopeLove 1/15/13 . chapter 9
Story is perfect.
Selfishly promoting this on tumblr. k? k.
| Guest 1/15/13 . chapter 9
Update soon please
| Guest 1/9/13 . chapter 9
Update soon please
| Havoc's-Tears 1/9/13 . chapter 9
Wow lol! So that is who it was... Fairy Beryl. Yea, I would have never guessed that! Right now though I am going to remain suspicious of her until she proves herself. Who would not be! She may be a Fairy apparently on the guy's side but she is still Beryl! Plus she got on my bad side even more by how she acted. So yea, we will just keep a little eye on her. ;) I really do like how it was an extremely different spin though! Keep up the goodness! This story is progressing rather nicely, you are doing a great job. I also can't wait for the "big reveal"!
| Minirowan 1/7/13 . chapter 9
So Helios didn't think it weird Mamoru was speaking about Hanada's injuries with someone over the phone? Mamoru even said Usagi's name out loud!
Anyway, in all seriousness, my eye started twitching once Beryl's name showed up. I don't know what you've done there, but I will remain suspicious of her until the very end! I also find it weird that she's so awkward around Mamoru, could she possibly recognize him?
But now that we know Usagi is collecting the soul gems/sailor crystals, I hope you plan to bring them back to life at some point. There's no need to keep them out of the story like the Shitennou were in canon, is there?
What I really can't wait for is the big reveal! The moment they realize who Mamoru really is and the truth behind the end of the Silver Millenium is one of the most awaited chapters.
Happy new year!
| SailorPtah 1/7/13 . chapter 9
Beryl as the other guardian! I love it. And the idea that she could/should have been a Maenad is really clever.
| buttaflykissesxoxo 1/6/13 . chapter 9
I'm really enjoying this. The beryl part had me falling over! Wow I can't wait for more with all these theories running through my head..