Its got that disney Pocahontas feel to it and I kinda like that aboutit. :) Looking forward to the next one!

Alright very interesting take on Zuko's search for the avatar. I wonder what is instore for our young exile and this beautiful amazon. Quick question what is the meaning of the poetry at the bottom of the chapter. I am totally OK with it I'm just curious. Very cool idea you have here make it come to life!
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This is such a neat idea and I really want to see where you go with it. Like I'm curious as to how you're going to play in the Gaang or if you are at all. Soma seems to be an interesting character and I can't wait to get to know her better and watch her and Zuko's relationship grow. :)

Can't wait for more!