This story made me laugh. Funny!

Very good! You did a lot with this format. Good job!

A very good haiku-based poem. o.X; I was led to believe that haiku were only one stanza. Oh well...

Hehe Cool story. Gary's awesome, as always, and darn that dog for biting him! Great work, love the haiku part! Sayonara!

That's a cool little poem,chicky. A whole story in a few short lines. Did it take you a while to think it up? It must be kind of hard to use only a certain number of syllables. Did you mean to spell you're wrong? Otherwise, it's a neat poem.