Excellent: True to character-and deeply sensual, as the tension between them comes THIS close to bubbling over.

The prose is marvelously eloquent, and romantic in its vivid movement. Well done.

This gave me shivers. No disrespect to the other authors on this site, but none of the other stories I have read so far made me imagine Sam and Diane. This fanfiction was short, but very sensuous. And the way you described things, from Sam's perspective and Diane's perspective was very believeable. The cutoff- with Carla and Al was perfect too.

I really enjoyed reading this! It was really good! P.S. LOVE your username! Diane will be so proud!

Wonderful update this was awesome, Carla has bad timing. lol This was fun to read you are a awesome writer, I love your stories.

the attention to detail and description in this story is marvelous! You really got their chemistry, and once again left the reader longing for more. Great job!