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reansensei 5/13/13 . chapter 1I never thought of Kuroko that way, of how insatiable he is. I usually thought of him as an innocent, pure, cute, little angel. Sometimes, I think of him as someone tsundere. I didn't know that I would like an aggressive Kuroko as well. I was happy when there's a new chapter, and then I was like, wah! Well, I guess I'll have to wait a little longer for a new one. It's rare to see stories about this pairing. I was really happy when I saw this. :) |
Kawaii-Neko1246 3/28/13 . chapter 2Ok...personally I really liked that story but u blew me away with chapter 2, I laughed so much I cried. Btw u do have an interesting writing style with this story but it got the point across an I liked it. Not to mention that imagining kurokochi being insatiable made me laugh. |
Hayaku Panda 3/24/13 . chapter 1OH my, kurokochhi is a ride or die person...no joke XD |
Seishirou Hitsugaya 2/2/13 . chapter 2I read this fic and I like them. I gotta say, sure they are not perfect ( besides who is perfect, really?), BUT they are quite interesting to read, I even find the fact that even though Kuroko had 12 rounds, he still want to continue; quite humorous and in a way kinda hot. I mean more of panting and moaning Kuro with passionate Kise? *squel like a yaoi fangirl she is* The reviewers who said your fic is crap really did need to know nobody is perfect and hello we are still FUCKING learning! Hey, cause there are not many smut contained stories( they said smut but inside they are no smut! ) of KiseKuro, please add more to the archive! Really want to read more of your new KiseKuro fics.. :D Oh yeah, may I recommend you one of my smut favourite fics? It's romance/humor/comfort, please try, they continued to amuse me every time I read them. It's : An Apple A Day. Death Note LXLight fanfic. Please try them. I always laugh when I read them. You will find the stress disappear after you read them. Sincerely, Sei |
anon 12/27/12 . chapter 2 okay, your stories are good, i love them, i love you, but tbh, even though i understand your point of view, and see nessie-sans rudeness, i think youve gone abit overboard with the reply :P remember, haters gunna hate, potatoes gunna potate. she might have been just giving constructive critisism. dont take them all to heart, and just be like, alright thats what she thinks, cool. people tend to be harsher on fanfiction because they dont have to say it directly to your face, and thats pretty sad, really :( that being said, why u no make another chapter? HAHAHAHA loved, love and loving your stories :) |
whiteheartgirl 12/3/12 . chapter 1I LOVE THIS STORY! I hope to read more of this couple! |
Geminis93 10/28/12 . chapter 1the ending! LOL...loved it! |
Call Me. MIRA 10/17/12 . chapter 2I love this, it may not have been as descriptive as others ive read but... idk i liked it WOW Kuroko sure had a big apatite :P |
Astrophel Thracius 10/8/12 . chapter 2I totally got the chills LOL that come back is just awesome... Please don't spout bull-crap about the authors because people who can't respect authors don't deserve respect themselves. If a story doesn't please you then PLEASE don't read it...if you DO finish reading it then be mindful of your comments because authors wants to share their idea and if you think that there is a better way to convey an idea then say so with due respect. Again, please respect others if you want to be respected too. If you don't, then go ahead and make people hate you. |
Crystal56 9/18/12 . chapter 2 Author-saaaaaan please Ignore those Haters and Make another Chapter ;A; I really love this Kikuro Story and It's totally fine for me. Everyone has their own opinions but for me You write so Beautifully :333 I love your Stories Very Very Muuuuuch *huggles and glomps u* |
Kuroshiroryuu 9/18/12 . chapter 2I like the way you think! If the don't like the story than don't even bother to read it right? No need to flame a person's hard work. And if you have the nerve to criticize someone's hard work, you try doing the same thing. And wait till you get a harsh flamer too. KARMA's the word. Sorry for reviewing like this, I just had to say this. (_ _) *bowd for apology* |
Kit-San 9/18/12 . chapter 2 Ahhh i had hope it was the secord chapter Like you story |
Nessie-san 9/17/12 . chapter 1First: Semi-okay smut. Second: Terrible grammar. Now, the reason I said "semi-okay" is because really, the smut sucked. I mean, had any of those been a fic unto themselves, I would've left almost a flame, especially because of the grammar. As it was, since they were all together, it worked okay... but I still think it would have been much more effective to have two really hot rounds, or maybe three, instead of four rounds of barely descriptive crappiness (which, by the way, is not a word, apparently XD), followed by truly shitty just-telling-what-happened. Whenever a fic ends with something like "And they stayed up all night" (or the equivalent), I get kinda annoyed. I mean, if you're going to say something like that, show it. Or else have so much amazing smut BEFORE you say that that we (the readers) would be like "0_o how can they keep GOING?!" As it was, I felt that a little bit, because you said they went to round twelve and Kuroko still wasn't satisfied (and holy hell, I have to wonder how that's possible...), but other than that I could totally see why Kuroko wasn't satisfied: It hadn't taken very long, according to how you described the smut, for them both to cum. Which would mean that Kuroko, at least, is completely justified in wanting more. Then, as to the grammar, I truly have no idea what you were doing with it. Names are always capitalized in English, and... actually, that may have been it apart from typos. I guess I was so weirded out by the names not being capitalized that I reacted more strongly than I should have. My apologies. Still, names are always capitalized. So, anyway, more description! Make it more explicit, and you have a smut-fic. Keep it how it is... I dunno. It barely showed me any pictures (I usually get pictures in my head from reading). |
Kurokocchi 8/16/12 . chapter 1 STAMINA. that's all I can say. WOW. XD 3 |
Kuroshiroryuu 8/4/12 . chapter 1Σ(O_O;)Shock!! OH GAWD! I swear Kuroko near swears at all so it didn't seem like the real Kuroko but still good |