|Reviews for Comeback|
| dyingimmortal 1/7/13 . chapter 4
This is really well-written, especially compared to some other fics I've seen in the BP category. All the characters seem like themselves, instead of being majorly OOC, which is great. I like how you're not rushing Kiri and Narumi's relationship. Hope you update :)
| Himeno Kazehito 12/4/12 . chapter 4
I really like this fiction
| Jem Juliette Jewels Jade 10/13/12 . chapter 4
Mor plz! :)
| ScRamb1ed 7/30/12 . chapter 1
bestest summary ever.
| Jaizina 7/26/12 . chapter 4
I'm kind of surprised this doesn't have reviews yet. It's pretty good, although it doesn't seem to be going anywhere at this point (but you said, you are stumped, so I'll let that go).
I really like your analysis of the manga and the speech bubbles. I've never really noticed (or really paused for that matter) when reading in my head. As for the story so far, I find cute. It has a nice flow.
I hope you keep writting (and eventually update that summary when you decide where to take this)!