|Reviews for In Search of a God|
| D'n'A000 2/25/13 . chapter 9
Can't wait for the next chapter. Looking forward to the next events. Keep up the good work.
| Maxim and knight 2/4/13 . chapter 7
Great chapter and thank for the shout out.
Maxim and Knight
| MaximAndKnight 1/28/13 . chapter 6
Glad your back Yami, cant wait to see what happens next.
| tiramisu19 1/27/13 . chapter 6
Welcome back. This plus Valence make for some interesting reads.
Question. How was Judgment Dragon able to (presumably) attack Zeng Yeoh directly? I'm assuming Zurvan has some sort of direct-attack capability. The issue that I find with your duel writing in this story and perhaps in other stories is the lack of explanation for the reader. On the other hand, we don't want characters making huge long-winded speeches explaining their cards and the implications of their effects.
This whole twin thing seems interesting. Here's hoping that your next few chapters provide some basis for the story, especially with the time lapse between updates. But thanks for continuing to write.
| tiramisu19 10/8/12 . chapter 5
I like the more descriptive style. It works well for these titanic battles between gods. This was also quite the duel. However, you did make one mistake that didn't really matter. When Brian summons Captain Gold, you describe it as attacking Yu's facedown monster, but you then have Yu lose 2100 LP in that turn when Uria attacked him directly. So, it didn't matter, but it was a mistake. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
| Amourenvie 9/13/12 . chapter 4
Nice to see that the story is beginning to set the stage. I enjoy when you bring characters from other arcs, keeping all of the connected, with the characters still relevant and not just regulated to a one-arc-only position. It will be interesting to see if any other familiar faces appear. I am sort of confused when you mention the three simultaneous storylines - will they be related at all or will they just be all at once? Maybe I am not understanding what you mean, which is understandable, since firstly I am not you and this arc has only just begun. The only thing I can say in regards to the short version of the duels is to be careful not to make them just static and/or redundant. Keep up the good work!
| kazikamikaze24 8/22/12 . chapter 3
Oh man, that was a wicked chapter! I do hope to see a Matt version card, as well as the Earthbound Immortals to appear. Well, I have a strong feeling its the Immortals, as they have the necessary five members to claim the additional spots. Either way, I can't wait for the next duel!
| Amourenvie 8/5/12 . chapter 2
I have to admit, I have taken a very long break from reading ff due to my lack of time-management skills and just got around to finishing "The End of Duel Academy." It's nice to see that you are planning on continuing the story, although I do wonder how you will manage to continue to keep this storyline running and interesting at the same time. It is challenging after I've seen so many other writers, not just ff, fall short of their intended goal just because they cannot keep writing at the same quality level, yet keep readers engaged, throughout such a long time. However, what you've got so far has been fun and I like how you're tying back to the very first story. It is nice to see a mention of past arcs, just for nostalgia's sake. Knowing from your previous works, you probably have a plan in mind, so all I can say is keep it up and don't get discouraged!
Oh yeah, I think I will have to leave reviews as a guest since I seemed to have lost my password and deleted the e-mail account I had attached to my ff account. Just in case you might have been wondering...well, I will say that I am looking forward to a meeting of the gods.
| Maxim and Knight 7/28/12 . chapter 1
great new story, cant wait to see what happens
Maxim and Knight
| Guest 7/22/12 . chapter 1
excellent start to the new story keep up the good work