It's dark...but I love it! Bad, bad Bella - an interesting twist. Happy to see that you're writing again, don't put pressure on yourself though! Just let it come naturally! xx

Thank you for sharing!

MG! What an unexpected twist. Word of the day: blood. (and more blood).

Well you got me! Loved that surprise ending that it was Bella and Not Edward that is the vampire and daughter of Carlisle. So much blood. Was he still alive? Very enticing. Wishing I could turn back the clock. To see their passion. To see what lead up to this. I like this plot bunny Racer!
thanks for writing!
IrisElli

Oh! **shivers** That was... So good! Gave me chills with your naughty twist at the end.
:-)))
I hope more words will start spilling forth soon, but please don't rush yourself. Look at what amazing things happen when you just let them come naturally. ((((HUGE HUGS))))

I really loved it! :) Didn't see the end coming, nice twist. Good to hear from you! 3

Wow! Great twist! Awesome one-shot. I love reading your stories, I was very happy to see an alert in my email today :-)
I really would like to read more of this! I hope you'll continue the story!
Huge hugs,
Elena

LOL. Wasn't expecting that ending. Yay for throwing a spanner in the works in something I was a bit scared to read (I dont do horror normally). xx

That's a twist.

I thought it "would be" not "is" or "was"?
Seems it has already happened.
Neat spin, a twist to the usual.
jansails/jan2

Hi MG,

I feel like I was the one indulged this morning.

I was so happy to see an alert from you waiting in my inbox today.

It's good to see you writing again and I look forward to more of this. Bella has been very bad indeed. How will Carlisle handle it all? And poor, poor Edward.

Thanks for writing,
Cran

Oh babes, I adored this! So descriptive and enticing. Love it xxx

:):)