That's so cute! I love it!

great! great! GREAT!

oh my gosh! it's...it's... more perfect than perfect! (if you know what i mean... -_-')

i love it!

you should really write more... more... MORE!

anyway, keep up the good work!

we! sappy! _ really, really sweet! I think I must have laughed for at least one half of the story, and melted away the rest! count on me to read your other S/M fics, too!

bye, Bengali!

Great oneshot!

I loved the story. So original, the writing style matched it perfectly and gave it soo much essence

I loved, I loved, I loved!

Write more S/M .

Damnit, that's good!

Awesome! realy different from any other of the fics I've read so far. Great job! v

moshi moshi! i so loved the story. simple but awestruck! so beautiful and soooo romantic in a way. dun quite writting cuz u hab good talents. hehe. plz continue! sagara megumi! lolz!

urs nd always a reviewer

*applauds* Lovely... you, dear author, have a way with words as well. I want to see more work soon!

I like your fic. keep up the good work. s/m rulezzzz.

ja

One word: WONDERFUL! Loved it! You have a gread writing style - and Sano will always be my fave! Love, Prudence-chan

This is good, good writing! Although anal old me is going to point out the inevitable - OOC, and very much so for Sano. But it's AU so okay, whatever. I screamed bloody murder at this bit: "And that's because I'm the god of words." But applauded at this one: "The speed of how she could receive my pointed remarks, warp it, and zap it back with the speed of a bullet sent my Mt. Olympus crashing down and made Zeus dwell upon the mere mortals." That was surely a flash of brilliance...

Wow! And I thought this was another cha[pter for the The Dragon & The Phoenix... but it's still good anyway! Man! Keep on writing! Never stop! Love your work! Now that's enough to keep you going for the next chapter of TDTP! _