God, this is too funny! Couldn't stop laughing, and I'm wondering what will happen next. Be careful, I got a little lost when Paul got hit in the face, literally until the time machine came up again. I think you used too many pronouns, so it got confusing. Watch out for that. Other than that, great job! I'll have to watch this story to see if it goes on any further.
Bookworm

Its good so far can't wait for the next chapter!