Reviews for The Ghost in the Machine
lost-in-elysium 1/26/13 . chapter 8
It's unforunate the Meredith's leg is crushed but at least David knows what to do. I wonder how her amputation will turn out and how Meredith reacts to the whole situation. I do understand why Shaw would stil be wary of David and not trust him; if I were her, I would be a bit skeptical as well. However, I don't think David poses any real threat, nor do I think he wants to cause any harm. I think he feels sorry for Shaw and wants him to trust her. The problem is how he is going to prove himself to gain that trust?

Great chapter. Please update soon!
Xeno Angel 1/23/13 . chapter 8
Very thrilling! Oh god poor Vickers! They will cut off her leg, oh god! Please update soon, can't wait :)
Guest 1/22/13 . chapter 8
Good and thanks for updating!
David 8 1/22/13 . chapter 8
It's been a while - and I am glad to see that you have decided to continue this story. Excellent work!
AerynsFallen 1/21/13 . chapter 8
Yay! An update! Short but interesting! Hopefully another update will be soon!
perfidiouspink 1/7/13 . chapter 7
Hi! gitterdun son! lol.. that's my review.
Frolicking Through Fandoms 12/31/12 . chapter 7
I love this story! This last chapter was incredibly well written without a proofread. :)

Great job, and I can't wait for more!
Mewlexii 12/2/12 . chapter 7
This is amazing! I especially love Davifs obsession with het hope you update soon :)
anon 11/26/12 . chapter 7
I love this. So much.
On the edge of my seat waiting for an update ;D
Viciously Witty 11/15/12 . chapter 7
Interesting to see that your let Vickers live. I wonder what you are going to do with this dynamic - very intriguing. I love that is is done from David's POV.

Looking forward to your next update.

Cheers,
Vic Wit
Viciously Witty 11/15/12 . chapter 4
I loved that scene in the movie. Michael Fassbender did a fantastic job of portaying David - and that exchange was particularly poignant.

And you're doing a fantastic job with the story thus far. I think you've expanded on David in a way that is entirely believable and very engaging.

I'm really enjoying it.

Cheers,
Vic Wit
lost-in-elysium 11/10/12 . chapter 7
I would still be a bit wary about David if I were Shaw...I don't think I would have agreed to put David back together so quickly, but I understand her reasoning because they needed to help Vickers. David can't still be trusted in my opinion. I do wonder how everything will work out now that Vickers is found to be alive. How will she react when she's conscious? I don't think she would be very cooperative, but she really has no choice but to trust Shaw and David if she wants to survive.

Great chapter. Please update soon!
orchid731 11/8/12 . chapter 7
vickers is ALIVE! yessss!
TheFilmFreak1234 11/8/12 . chapter 7
please continue!
Bionic Angel 11/6/12 . chapter 7
Every word of your story is pure perfection. I love it!
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