Legends being one of my favorites of the Dragonlance series, this story especially tore at me. The final line had me.

The writing is crisp and clean, and you captured the twins perfectly. A lot of writers make them too out of character, but you stayed very well with the way Weis and Hickman wrote them. My favorite characters. Love it.

...WHY WOULD YOU WRITE THIS.
AS;KAGJSBD FEELS.

Sad and touching. It could have gone this way...
I like it how you did not try to make Raistlin appear good. How he undoubtedly had some redeeming features, at this point in the story he had buried them very deep to capable of all he did or tried to do.

A well written piece. Thank you!