| Reviews for The Oz Land Falls: The Land Is Coming to an End |
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L 2/11/13 . chapter 1 What fuck was that? |
kelskassis99 7/22/12 . chapter 1Hey Abby! U know who I am and if u didn't get it ask ur Sis! This wa pretty good, though the only. Thing I suggest is to go back and proof your work because I caught a lot of errors. It's a common mistake I used to make. I also would suggest checking ur grammar, other than that, good job girlie! |