Wow. This was totally worth reading. Personally, I expected Ruffians to be those gibberish speaking idiots raised at a young age to be Pester's minions but you have flipped my view around. Again! :D You gotta stop that. I didn't even think the Ruffians would get to keep the money they got bribed! I guess it really DOES pay well! I'm glad that people with such opposite views can be friends. I'm even more glad that Hafez turned down that offer for sure! :D I'm surprised he even considered it! What would Leafos say?! Again, so glad he didn't become a Ruffian. I never expected his mother to make such a huge fuss. Then again, when you disappear for, like, a day, someone's gonna say something. Splendid work! This segways nicely into your latest fic. I hope to see more from you soon!

I'm glad Hafez turned down that Ruffian's offer! Smart guy! His questions were great, though. :D

I like that he's close to his family. It's very sweet. :)

And I'm looking forward to seeing how his family reacts to Leafos! Though I'm sure they'll say nothing but good things!

Fab work as always!

Sorry for the delay, I've been SUPER busy, and today is no exception, but I found time to review for you! :D

I'm really loving Hafez, he's a really interesting character and I can already tell he's an interesting match for Leafos! :D Speaking of, you made one itty bitty mistake. Leafos isn't Jardy's youngest daughter, she's his oldest. :)

The way you envision the Ruffians is super interesting, too! I loved this whole chapter and I'm looking forward to more! :D

Ahhhh, so incredible! Hafez is shaping up to be an interesting dude, what with his backstory of being a less than savory person!

I love his feelings for Leafos already, too! The talking Ruffian has an interesting personality as well; I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes! I can't WAIT for more! I'm really interested in seeing your ideas about the Ruffians. :3