I finished this awhile back, but didn't get the chance to review it. I gotta say that Nátta Edda was worth the time reading on my PSP, all 2million words of it.

What I have to praise the most is your characterization and world-building, as well as the length. Weird thing to praise eh? I love long stories because I read through most books far too quickly, long stories allow me to sate my hunger. And with an average of almost 10K words a chapter, it was a most satisfying experience.

I was initially a little put off by the quickness of the 'death' of Luna and Scrivy, but it fits. And at the end we get Antares and a perfect setup for another series if you so choose, if not I find it a great ending regardless.

Speaking of characters, every single one, whether from the show or from the story, were amazing characters. And I love how you 'retconned' the story with the layers, I'm sure that was handy with the big surprise of the Season 2 Finale.

There are a few errors in grammar and spelling, but you did mention not having a beta reader to assist so I can understand that.

Anyways, I've rambled on, and I guess I should end this. But once again, thank you for an awesome series. Nátta Edda will always hold a place in me.

QR

just when i thought the story was finally over, you throw this sequel hook on the table. Oh well, i'm not complaining, every one of your stories are pure gold, and this one was no exception. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work

I see a Sequel Hook on this.

I love your works, please don't let this be the ultimate end.

Pleasepleasepleaaase! There has to be something else! It can't end like that! What about Luna and Scrivener! You can't just kill them off! They're the tainted-heroes! They can't die! At least keep writing!

Amazing, breathtaking, and moving. A truly spectacular story. I love it when things suddenly click into place as a giant picture for the whole series.

Your story is set up perfectly for so many possibilities, and I can't wait to see what's next.

Nice ending. Please say you'll do a follow-up. I want to know if Luna and Scrivener are really alive or not.

I'm not going ramble about how absolutely amazing this series is, since you've most likely heard it all before.

But I have to ask:Is this the end? Because dear lord, I would love for this to continue. Of course, it's your choice, but I just have to know.

Enter Beauty. I'm surprised Breakbeat didn't try flirting with Vinyl before the action began. Would have been... deliciously... in-character for her.

inb4 Scrivy gets Alternate Vinyl's change into Breakbeat as well when Beauty dies.

inb4 Beauty's companion is revealed as Spike's counterpart.

Can one feel sympathy for the Devil if he genuinely desired to repent?

Ah, the innocence of a child... Good for Antares, not being pulled in by NM's offer of power.

Meant to send this out earlier this week, but things happened. Better late than never though eh?

First off, I gotta say that this chapter is one of my all time favorites. I absolutely love the two Draconequus going at it! Once again, your characterization of Discord is superb, heck, the characterizations throughout all your writings are amazing.

I have noticed errors though, mostly gender issues with some grammatical nonsense and a few missing letters, this applies to the story as a whole. Perhaps you could get a pre-reader to give your work a skim and hunt down those pesky mistakes.

Will be continuing to read! I am vastly enjoying your series.

Happy writing!

QR

Well, now! There's an interesting way of things! Very nice performance with tying BLCA with the main series.

i guess being hung is only ever delightful if you're doing it to yourself in a closet!

also let me guess
delight - Pinkie
beauty- Rarity
prudence- Fluttershy
courage - Rainbow
valor- Applejack
wisdom- Twilight

finally remembered account info so i can post once again with fanfiction. I began reading this chapter thinking, "Yay! new chapter!" than i realized that this is where the love conquers all storyline fits in place. I haven't gotten around to reading that yet, due to a super busy schedule. Now I have to read an additional 58 chapters, before i continue to read this story becuz i am a stickler for reading things chronologically. So congratulations for taking up all of my free time for the next month or so _ XD.

oh crap gymbyr origin story go!