Very nice start! Hey I got an idea! It would be so cool if this was all like a dream that Jess had one night that could partially turn true (like someone stalking Keith xD)!

Hello from Hawaii! What an awesome idea! I love a little ATTEMPTED MURDER in a fanfic! Seriously.

So you say there's going to be Jeith and Hisa, but will there be any DAnnie?

Eagerly waiting an update, JAS

*Gasp*
What just happened? I wasn't sure what to expect after reading the title of this story. All I know is that I need to read the next chapter.
-Beta