God I wish I lived near you! I would love to go into that halloween haunt, too bad there was no Dennis or Jackal, that kinda sucks. Your story kicks ass by the way, I really like it!

Looks very good so far. You probably won't need to do a chapter for the Juggernaut (since we saw how he was captured at the start of the movie, but you can still do one if you feel it needs to be included).

this was cool plz start writing it again soon

that rocked

that rocked..."redrose2310 sings as she walks off"

Interesting so where is the rest of it?

First off, you get props for writing about 13 ghosts at all... Second, the story was good. Of course, I won't really really like it until you get into the angry princess. *It may make me a perv, but the girl was hot.* And, just so you know, they're are descriptions of who each of thosts was in a past life on the website. Not as interesting as your description of their capturing though. Love, darkblessedchilde

Whoa dude! That was amazing! I've never been real good a reviews and I'm guessing this time will be no differnt...

Anyway! I reallyed liked this...I've read quite a few of the capturing the 12 ghosts fics and this is one of the best, I liked the start with dennis introducing what was going on, and I also like his narritive POV...well done

Take a lolly from the big jar...

Keep up the great work

I love thir13en ghosts and thought that this story did both dennis rafkin and thir13en ghosts justice,well done!hope you write more soon!

Hehe...this was fantastic. Keep up the good work! Hopefully Erin won't die, but hey, it's your story. Good job! Keep it up, this is going to be a great story!

Moony Smith