Really, really love this story. Love your version of the mermaids; it depresses me that they weren't in the film. Hope to see more from you in this fandom :)

Would you PLEASE do more? I really like this.

D'aww, Tootles :) Loved this chapter so much
Can't wait for the next update!
ZoeM

This is really sweet 3 I thought that Fox's death was way too downplayed, and I'm glad to see a bit more of the other kids too. I'm really anticipating Curly and Tootles' reactions, and poor Twins! I just want to give him a hug right now :(
Looking forward to more,
ZoeM

This is amazing! I love each update, so I can't wait for every update. Keep it up :D

This is sooo good can't wait for the next chapters! Keep this up! What you could do is In one chapter after the whole Jimmy becoming Hook and Peter loosing his shadow Fox should come back :) because then you could carry on and stuff :) please update soon!