|Reviews for Candice City|
| moriah.latham 1/23/13 . chapter 6
hey why not make another story with loveing lysander he doesnt really hve that many. hmmph but i definitly HOPE & PRAY that your laptop gets fixed bcuz i am in love with this story. yeah i liked it that much i absolutly positivly cant wait 4da next chapter! FINNALLY SOMEONE TOLD AMBER WHAT NEEDED TO BE SAID! 'that b**** needed it BAD!
| moriah.latham 1/22/13 . chapter 5
lol i reallly wanna c it now :)! :D
| Core.of.the.Cookie 11/25/12 . chapter 6
Love the corset fitting! Great chapter (as always) Update soon!
| Genuinely-Unique 11/1/12 . chapter 6
On my 16th birthday (last month) I told my mom to tell me 'happy birthday' and she said 'what's so great about it?'... I wore her down eventually though, hahaha.
I love how you make it so that Alise (Ah-leese, as emphasized many times) conveys her emotions like a real person, and lets me feel what she feels. The way it's not just 'I felt very sad', but rather 'I felt myself falling apart, ripping with grief'. I love it, I love how I can literally feel her pain, that I actually feel her heart-wrenching longing for her daddy.
| Lazy hero 10/21/12 . chapter 6
Same birthday as me and this was the best present :)
| xxXLoneWolfXxx 10/17/12 . chapter 6
I loved the scene when they were on the bench! There happy? LOL!
| djrocksforever 9/8/12 . chapter 6
this is a awesome story, love it. thanks for posting this can't wait till the next chapter is posted
| Acacia Fynn Mellark 9/7/12 . chapter 6
I reaallly cant wait for more of this. i must have more Castiel 0.0 Alise is an amazing character that i can conect to in so many ways. I am honestly waiting for this to appear again cause i NEED to know what happens next! :D
| Moonlight-Dreaming 8/27/12 . chapter 6
This had me laughing the whole time XD
It was to funny :P
I hope your laptop starts working again soon.
Happy late birthday! :)
| JinxSpunk 8/26/12 . chapter 6
Well.. HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY! Haha, I'm glad I found this now, I'm really excited for more! This is my first time reviewing a story so sorry if it's not what you'd expect..but it probably is, Anyway! This chapter was great, story wise I love your collaboration of the characters and your own twist to the plot. It's really awesome and I do hope I get to read more soon! You have a great sense of humor that's brought to the story, I've tried to write some fanfiction myself and envy your way of words haha. Well, my favorite part along with the fact that I adore Castiel is his and Alise moment of talking before the crazy dog losing principal interrupted. I don't have any negative comments to make at the moment but only to keep WRITING! Excited for more.
| compa16 8/26/12 . chapter 6
Oh the part where poor Leigh. Was gettin sorrg made fun of was my fave sorry your laptop broke..I know the pain at least you still have Internet. Also I love how your doing this story its so awesome
| compa16 8/26/12 . chapter 1
Must read more
| Unknown 8/25/12 . chapter 6
this entire story was fantastic what happens with the car wash and all the perverts and their crazy house wives? i seriously cant wait until you write more to this, needless to say you are really creative when it comes to writing good job,by the way this part was a good one i couldn't stop laughing when rosa said just keep your breasts inside your bra. lol laughed for ten minutes afterwards and my sides were hurting.
| Rainhealsme 8/24/12 . chapter 6
I absolutely love your story and writing style. But, I want to point out that using copyright song lyrics are against the rules, and could get you or the site sued. I would hate it if your story got removed because of the lyrics, so please remove them (in chapter three) when you get a chance. - xXKiraUzumakiXx
| Sami365 8/24/12 . chapter 6
Wow, nice lol. I like the 'wearing down his masculinity' part. Poor Leigh lol. Loved the chapter. I cant wait for your next one :)