good idea, get to Butters and Bob to determin wath hi is an angel or demonic who can tell better then Bob.

It shows promise but I'm frustrated by not knowing WHO ARE YOU? Who is this person narrating their story to the reader. A young guy? And old guy. A little 'ol lady ? What do you do all day? What is inspiring you to get involved? I assume you are single? Tell me something so I have some kind of picture of you in my head and can try to understand your motivations.