hi I really like your story please update please? :)

I hope you decide to keep writing soon - it's good so far :] xxx

Work on your grammar and punctuation a bit. No flames please! I'm just trying to give constructive criticizm. Other than that, a good job.

Awesome story but when r u gonna update more TT?

please update soon! _

Great! All I have to say

Update soon please. This is like, the best fan fiction I have EVER read. Not just out of Spider-Man fictions, but EVERY single fanfic out there. UPDATE SOON PWEASE! :3

I'm actually really, really looking forward to the new chapter, haha, I really like this story. Anyway, I hope the next chapter is up soon and keep up the good work!
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Update please! i love this story! i especially like that she has herself talking to her! i love it!

I can honestly say I don't have any idea where you are going with this, but I'm lovin' it. Certainly intriguing. I hope Alice is ok. Peter, a clueless chuckle-head *sigh*. See you at the next chap!

really liking your first few chapters please update soon x

Wow, wow, wow - what was that? Lol. Really good! You drastically improved! Great chapter!

Holy hell...WTF was that?! I'm sooo super weirded out right now... That was fudgin' awesome.

Oh Alice is putting the pieces together about Peter's super powers! He better be careful or she will learn all his secrets and then Peter will have nowhere to run! (lol) Please show Alice getting in some action soon! The waiting is killing me! :D

This is an amazing story, I really like where it's going. Update soon!