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| Reviews for Thorns of a black rose |
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  Guest 4/23/13 . chapter 6 Good story please update |
| keithallen 2/18/13 . chapter 6 YES, this is gonna get good :) |
 ebo372 2/10/13 . chapter 6shit hit the fan with Yuka arriving awsome clifhanger |
| Guest 1/30/13 . chapter 3 Please continue |
| King of Utopia 12/30/12 . chapter 5 Amazing chapter. Please update |
| Dusk 'till Gone 12/29/12 . chapter 1 Good opening, although [as constructive criticism] could be a bit longer, and be more descriptive. |
| Guest 12/21/12 . chapter 4 *waiting for an update* |
| Whisper 12/5/12 . chapter 1 Wow! I have always been the BIGGEST fan of Elfen Lied! This chapter captures Lucy's true, and burning love for Kohta, and that is what kept me reading. I noticed a few typos, and a few missused/ unused puntuation. Other than that, it was GREAT. |
| Neusuada 11/30/12 . chapter 4 update! |
| scooby.bloodluv 11/27/12 . chapter 2 where can you get the manga i been loookin for it and can't find it |
| Sonia 10/28/12 . chapter 3 Lady Lucilla i really love your story. I am looking forward to reading next chapter. Please, please update soon! You are an amazing author! |
| LunarSkies2383 10/27/12 . chapter 3 Just like last time this had a lot of weird grammatical errors with spacing and incorrect spelling. So I suggest a quick read through before posting as it will solve a lot of problems. Now I'll give you a pass on Kaede's mentality since it was already such a fractured mess allowing you to manipulate it to whatever you wish it be. But although I'd like to believe that love conquers all, Kohta should be a bit more hesitant about what he feels. I mean she killed his father and sister right in front of him for goodness sake. I'd think he'd feel conflicted between loving her yet hating her for what she did. However it's fiction nonetheless. So I'll just take this as it is as this is just me being vocal about what I'm thinking. Anyways progression seems to be coming along. So good job in writing thus far and update when you can. |
| Neusuada 9/26/12 . chapter 2 keep writing please! |
| LunarSkies2383 9/5/12 . chapter 2 Content was good. But sentence structure could use a bit of polishing with some weird quirks I saw here and there. Overall chapter was good, but please don't let Kaede kill anyone else. Granted the 'DNA voice' preys on her insecurities thus allowing it to influence her. But I hope her willpower will not break under it's influence. So update when you can. |
| keithallen 7/23/12 . chapter 1 Very nice start! You captured good emotion and well written. I can see things becoming very hard for Lucy/Nyu. I'd really like to see where you go with this. |
