Plz don't separate them. They love each other.
Let abhijeet get his love

Story was awsome & end was great bt i think u should continue:)

FK , i seriously think that u shud continue writing this story , plz dont mind but i actually want tabhirika together in this story ...neways nice chapter but abhirika on different paths , quite dissappointing according to me , plz plz dont get hur sorry agar i hurt u ... but in my opinion , u shud write more ...

no dude you just can't stop it like this. you plz complete both swayamwar as well as this one. all the best.

Was a very soft and simple chap. Its true that if kismat wants we will get something but we have to put our efforts for the thing we want the most. And Abhijit shld have put his CID powers to find Tarika instead of leaving her. Words speak louder in love sometimes. And do continue. Fav part was Tarika and ACP talk. Was touche. :)

enjoyable story you can show some DUO movements

HBey veru nice update dear...I like Abhi-Tarika emotional convo nd love Daya's caring towards Abhi...I know Tarika got hurt badly but u can't leave ur loved one like this...on his own...hope Tarika came back...

Very nice one...

Some how I feel Tarika was right in taking that decision... I am not against Abhijeet... but Some how I feel its Tarika's self respect which is hurt by Abhijeet

Very nice one... I am the one who saying from start that all should be well between Abhrika but I am happy with this ending

please continue with your stupidism although i don't think it is stupidism. i loved this story throughout and please tell us in the end if they ever meet or not.

this was a perfect story and a neutral end which i love that if not abhirika then nothing ;) but if you are willing do continue yaar, agar mera stupidism chal sakta hai toh tumhara toh scope hi scope hai :D

why yar?
bst of luck futur project.

Aweoosme but I never felt YHAT Devyana was a bad gal. Officer but still overall aweome ABHIRIKA US BRAKING UL ?
Waiting for nxtplz
Update fast

When the lady started giving her explanation, I had guessed it was Divyana! :) but great update.. Worth the wait! :)

he nice update... I read it in rush but its too good... Willl read it again

hope in the end all thing goes ok with Abhijeet and Tarika

Wow. What a chap. Itna suspense ke baad devayana was the culprit. Nice work. Lagtha hai Tarika ne b transfer keliye apply kiya hai. So how will abhijit stop her now?