I'm not going to lie, this is probably the most well written aqw fic on this site :D congratz lol but seriously u did a really good job, describing characters and the setting of the story, I hope u go deeper into the characters back stories and maybe show or reference how they became so close and loyal. Other than that a really good job, and I like the way u represented Nulgath lol I'm looking forward to more of this story