Aww, Magic Writer, I don't like you at all but I freakin' love Anna like she's my lil' sis so imma gonna review FOR (Jess: FOOD!) HER!
Jess: What the f*ck? We talked about this, yummies before honies!
Thunder: But honey IS yummy...
Jess: ... Oh shut up.

I love this story xD

Entries not allowed:

1. Non-stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc.
2. One or two liners.
3. MST: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story.
4. Stories with non-historical and non-fictional characters: actors, musicians, and etc.
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.
6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.

Your story is not allowed under section 6 of the guidelines.

Try writing your story like a traditional story and not in script/chat format as stories written like that are not allowed here. Even if you went with 'Anna said' and 'Kisame said' with quotation marks ("") around the dialogue it would be enough to fix it.

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