Reviews for Storytime
Mrs.SRE Snape 11/18/12 . chapter 1
loved this, it was a unique pairing but very well written
xari 11/6/12 . chapter 1
Terribly sweet, loved it.
chef diamond heart 11/4/12 . chapter 1
Aaww! Nice little twist-there are more advantages to mental gifts than are commonly known ... Good thing we get to interview the holders thereof personally, isn't it?

I've had this on my TBR FOREVER! Glad I finally got here :D Carmen
MtAiryGrl 10/31/12 . chapter 1
Awrsome
maxipoo1024 10/23/12 . chapter 1
There was always something about Edward/Alice pairings that freaked me out. But the divine miss LJ tackled it, and the freak in me secretly wanted to see these two get it on. You did not disappoint! Between the mental connection and then the final buildup to the physical, I was completely enthralled. I really felt like I was in their minds too. Great job, my friend!
Fictionators 10/19/12 . chapter 1
The Fictionators - www dot fictionators dot com/ has featured your story on our site for the week of 10/19/2012.

Thanks, we really appreciate your contribution to the fandom :)

Songster for The Fictionators (waves)
k1942 8/25/12 . chapter 1
Truly amazing, what those two gifts can conjure together!
GeezerWench 7/21/12 . chapter 1
Ah HA! Sex without the mess! (mostly) and no touching, and no maiming of furniture and...

No garments were harmed in the making of this fanfic.

Well done. I could SO see this happening between Edward and Alice. Instead of keeping it real, they're keeping it mental.

Which could be right cool at times. Super Sneaky Secret Squirrel stuff. Considering the speed at which their vamp minds work, it would be done and over within moments. Covert sex anywhere, any time. How convenient.

Yep. They'd have made a great couple in the Twilight Saga.
Leelan Oleander 7/20/12 . chapter 1
Never a pairing I would have ever thought I'd like, but again, you work that voodoo that you do and I'm smitten! I also loved that it was all in their heads-the mind is a magical place and I was kind of curious as to the possibilities available for a seer and a "hearer" (for lack of a better word-it's Friday and my brain is mush).

*sigh* what a lovely way to celebrate the end of a hard week. Thanks, babe!
MelkiSihou 7/20/12 . chapter 1
It was great writing and a great concept... but ubber creepy since I think of them two has brother and sister. I couldn't get past that prospect of their relationship from the book. Sorry. But like i said... great concept and writing!
Thats-So-Alex 7/19/12 . chapter 1
When I venture into non-canon it's generally your stories :p but I do like this pairing maybe I need to read some more of it? :p
I loved this though. :))
Bells. Just Bells 7/19/12 . chapter 1
That was fun :) What good storytime!
I really enjoyed getting lost in Edward and Mary Alice's minds. I needed that. It's just been a rotten week and I'm tired and moody and don't even want to read and reply to email. I sawt his update though and even my funk couldn't keep me away. Thanks for helping me escape for moment. I love you! :)
letsjustdance 7/19/12 . chapter 1
Interesting..I guess you could call this a "mind-f*ck" in a good way? loved it! I always thought these two were a better match, which, of course, leaves our Jasper to his Bella..lol..yummy! *hugs*
bkhchica 7/18/12 . chapter 1
Oh my God... That was hot! Whew... Very cute story though! :) You should write one of when Rosalie finds Emmett- that would be a good read ;) I love getting alerts in my email that you have written a new story. They are always so good!
NKubie 7/18/12 . chapter 1
Hey LJ!

I got this one twice (though I only read once...for now) since I subscribe to your stories and Dirty Cheeky Monkey.

I would never have read a E/B story, but I thought for you, I'd take a chance. Glad I did. That was freakin' hot!

The ending was so unexpected. I love it! I did something similar, but I'm sure not as skillfully as you.

And this: "...her voice rose in a ululant wail." Definitely an underused word! :)

Nice job!

xo
Nan
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