|Reviews for Naive|
| akabetty 5/18/13 . chapter 21
This was fantastic. I began reading, wondering if I would finish and then got sucked into all of it. I love Siona, and your characterization of Erik. I loved the progression of both characters, the twining of the Civil War and the attention to detail. I wish I had better words, but simply put, this was amazing start to finish.
| Noblescar 3/29/13 . chapter 21
A brilliantly well written and enjoyable story. I liked the epilogue in particular as you ended the story in such a way that almost all questions were answers. In fact, the only question that I have is whether the dunmer you mentioned is Karliah. Is she?
Favourited as I intend to re-read it again some time in a few months.
| RoseJaestyr 3/21/13 . chapter 21
Well that was an interesting tale however I wont lie it definitely felt like it was going too fast at some point.
I feel like there were some periods that should have been touched upon a little deeper such as the civil war and the war with the thalmor they just seemed to come and go so quickly in the story and at some points it felt like plot points just sprung up out of no where such as the children.
All in all I feel like it was a good run but like I said a tad rushed which is understandable given your life at the time of writing and college and everything lord knows college does little to promote free time.
Anywho thanks for the read I look forward to another story by you if you plan on writing one.
| RoseJaestyr 3/20/13 . chapter 14
Alright so I've read the fic up to this point and I have to say it's been pretty good.
I feel like I need to point this out. In all honesty the scene where Siona is beating the crap out of Erik just feels like a little much.
I was okay with the initial punch to the face that made perfect sense and I was even willing to go along with the second punch, but the knee to the gut and fierce uppercut? That my friend is going just a tad too far.
Other than that everything seemed pretty good I've enjoyed your writing thus far and hope to enjoy more in the future.
| Duinhiril Rinaruine Telcontar 3/20/13 . chapter 21
AMAZING! (insert Skyrim theme here. See what I did there?)
I loved how you tied everything together and brought the sidequests into the story. I also loved how you played with the freedom fanfiction bestows, without me sensing anything overdone. Although, I spotted a few grammar errors but it didn't really affect me. :P
Man, to be honest I never really give reviews but I loved your work so much I just had to!
Keep up the good work! I hope you continue to do what you love! :D
| guest 1/20/13 . chapter 21
Well, not sure if you'll be reading this, as I'm a bit late...but, man, that was good. Certainly one of the best epilogues I've ever read; really liked how you explained what happened. And great story, it may have moved a bit fast towards the later chapters; I mean, in an hour, the story has certainly changed drastically...but I understand with college, and it was actually an interesting change to see time move by very quickly. I really liked how imaginative the story was; very little was taken from the game. Well done indeed. Of course, you've got me interested in the new dragonborn now...that would be an interesting story, seeing what happens with two in a row...
| brooklynn.meyer.9 11/18/12 . chapter 21
That story was awesome! Hmmm maybe u should write about the fourth child!
| Crab Apples 10/26/12 . chapter 21
Ok now there's a problem. I'm crying and my throat is all choked up and oh my Gulum-Ei I love you. I can't belive you wrote such an amazing story in twenty one chapters. I always get choked up when great stories end, but this.
Alright, great story, you deserve a Statue of Dibella. *sniff*
| Crab Apples 10/26/12 . chapter 20
Yes yes yes.
| Crab Apples 10/26/12 . chapter 19
Once again, thank Talos Erik's not dead. I wanna say something weird, like Siona turned into a dragon, but naw.
| Crab Apples 10/26/12 . chapter 18
Oh my ffffff, thank everything there is to thank, I thought everyone would fall over and die. I swear, I hyperventilated for a few seconds. The drama bombs everywhere.
IT'S ALMOST DONE I'M ALMOST THERE.
| Crab Apples 10/26/12 . chapter 16
I felt awkward reading Erik's poetry, then I started squealing when they kissed.
And the, HOLY CRAP, a DRAMA BOMB.
AND THEN ANOTHER.
I'm gonna go sniffle in a corner now.
Wait don't tell me...SIONA DOESN'T KILL ERIC, DOES SHE?!
I'VE NEVER BEEN SO SCARED TO READ IN MY LIFE.
| Crab Apples 10/26/12 . chapter 15
Oooh, I wish I reviewed this earlier! Lemme get you to a hundred, this story deserves every last review :D
I can seriously imagine Siona's reactions throughout the entire story. Especially the whole, "You should clear the cave alone," part. I can see a lot of people would get pissed off at that, especially if all that other shit happened before.
I hate Alva, and the Tavern Clothes.
| Alexie666 10/12/12 . chapter 21
I absolutely loved it! Well written, romance, action, thrill, many hints for those who know the game well...Excellent!
I was confused at some point, with the years passing so quickly, but I managed to follow in the end.
If only it could've lasted 20 chapters more!
I do hope you'll make other fanfics with Erik, or other lesser-known characters. :)
| darkdemoness41791 10/8/12 . chapter 21
I LOVED this story! Espicially what you did with the children! I REALLY hope you make a sequel with them, or a serious of one shots, because this was amazing!