I've read this a few times and my opinion is still the same. This deserved to be chaptered. It could always be negative such as this, probably the only negative SS fic I'd ever read, but it would be worth it.

Nice

Loved it!

So dark and beautiful, I really liked this :)

That opening line, man. Did me in already. You have a terrifying power, you know? You reel unsuspecting or expecting readers in, and you never fail to disappoint.

Nicely written. Thanks!

Great job! You captured every moment perfectly in sync with their characters. Keep up the good work ]

i liked this story. Its was very good. Well written and everything. You should do something like this again but like add a very long story to it. But then it will end on a good way probably. Or something. Anyway, good job! C:

I really enjoyed it even though it had an open ending. I like your writing a lot!

This story is bittersweet and that is what makes it a good read! Great job! .

Bittersweet *cries* it's very good , made my day( well night to be technical haha) I really want to read more sasusaku from you.

I think you captured them very well... they wouldn't be okay from one day to the othter but maybe... just maybe, they could heal together. Greatly done from Sasukes poof!

Congrats on your 100th story! It was great!

My god, I can't- so much feels! Sakura... Sasuke... let me hug you

oh jeez. you're making me tear up here. I've been slacking off in keeping up with your writing but I'm glad to see it's only gotten better. I keep reading SasuSaku fics that keep dealing with that moment on the bridge and it's true, how can someone just get over that? He tried to kill her, violently and deliberately. I'm glad you make it real and have it as something that isn't just glossed over. I really wish they could still be together though T_T